I had some difficulty with the lettering on this page (and the next!)

For once, it wasn't so much a matter of placement or, as on many of the other pages, just a matter of having to squeeze too much wordy text into too small a space. The problem I needed to solve in this sequence was how to show that - because their minds are still joined - Ryan and Starflower are speaking in unison.

I suppose it's not essential to the story since (I hope!) the information is all here, whoever you happen to believe is speaking it. However, if you did understand what I was trying to do here (before I explained it!), then that's especially cool!

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